I've got 6 more sentences from my short story Dessert First this week. Alexis and Morgan have just met.
“You’re Mrs. Arnette?” He cocked his head to the side and raised an eyebrow.
“I’m her daughter.” Alexis bent over and began collecting the fallen strawberries. “Who are you?”
“Morgan Crane, the caterer.”
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“I’m her daughter.” Alexis bent over and began collecting the fallen strawberries. “Who are you?”
“Morgan Crane, the caterer.”
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8 comments:
And a very sexy caterer, I remember. Great six! :)
Smooth dialogue....enjoyed your six and definitely would like to see what's coming next :)
Like the strawberries! Nice beginning to what will undoubtedly be an interesting relationship. Excellent excerpt!
Great intro!
Oooh. A man who can cook. Yum.
Morgan Crane - love the name! x
I totally agree with Dee, great intro.
Like your intro six!
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